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Saturday, September 24, 2005

lohe ka swaad

“Shabd kis tarah kavita bante hain,
ise dekho… aksharon ke beech ghire hue
aadmi ko padho

kya tumne suna kee yeh
lohe kee awaj hai ya
mitti mein gire khoon kaa rang?

lohe ka swad lohar se mat pucho…
uss ghore se pucho jiske muh mein lagam hai”

A Poem by “Sudama Pandey Dhumil


“Look how are words moulded into a poem, read the man who is surrounded by letters. Did you hear something?

Is it the sound of iron or the blood split on the soil?

Don’t ask a blacksmith about the taste of iron, but ask the horse who has it in his mouth…”

-aseem

9 Comments:

  • yeh kavita dhumil ne apni maut se chand ghante pehle gehen sar dard ki awastha mein likhi thi

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 2:39 pm  

  • Dhumil...
    I like his poems.
    aseem, I am a journalist based in Nagpur. Thanks for posting LOHA.
    Regards,
    niranjan markandeywar

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 8:30 pm  

  • :)

    -aseem

    By Blogger kri80vt, at 9:02 pm  

  • hey niranjan, i hope you know that this poem is about journalists.. well.. perhaps i am underestimationg you.. anyways.. do keep coming back.. :)

    By Blogger kri80vt, at 9:03 pm  

  • I read this first in my 9th or 10th std & till date one of my favt...

    Specially the line where he says "kya tumne suna kee yeh
    lohe kee awaj hai ya
    mitti mein gire khoon kaa rang?"

    By Blogger Sudhanshu Verma, at 1:27 pm  

  • That is the line where lies all the irony of the poem.. isnt it?

    By Blogger kri80vt, at 1:34 pm  

  • yaar koi mujhe please is poem ka meaning samjha do. I didnt understand it fully.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:53 am  

  • Dude, thanks a lot. I have been looking for this poem. I read it back in school.

    Cheers!

    By Blogger Rana, at 5:31 pm  

  • Hi Aseem, can you please explain to me the meaning of this poem. I will be grateful

    Aman

    PS: And in case there are any questions in your mind, no we havenot met before I just came across this poem and am curious to know the meaning

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 12:24 am  

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